tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post1128103409655088925..comments2023-10-14T22:05:35.306-04:00Comments on T.K. Toppin: SFFSat - Sept 15TK Toppinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-12918911988784278582012-09-17T08:19:45.410-04:002012-09-17T08:19:45.410-04:00Thanks. Glad you liked!!Thanks. Glad you liked!!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-37269491687432392942012-09-17T08:19:05.309-04:002012-09-17T08:19:05.309-04:00Thanks!!Thanks!!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-18836233174876186682012-09-16T10:25:36.590-04:002012-09-16T10:25:36.590-04:00Great snippet! My interest is definitely piqued, a...Great snippet! My interest is definitely piqued, and I love your writing style!Jessica McHughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14898089354405889506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-27856018026058491162012-09-16T05:36:17.461-04:002012-09-16T05:36:17.461-04:00I loved this line, '...it looked defiled after...I loved this line, '...it looked defiled after Customs had their way with it,..'<br /><br />Great snippet :)Chantalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05569187153786630277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-62616944614862872862012-09-15T20:50:41.530-04:002012-09-15T20:50:41.530-04:00She's taunting him. Nice!She's taunting him. Nice!Alexa Gravehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16250741051279927895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-41381399278069856902012-09-15T20:35:27.368-04:002012-09-15T20:35:27.368-04:00(snicker) Had their way with it and defiled his lu...(snicker) Had their way with it and defiled his luggage. LOL!! Love it!JC Casselshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12359245589507445547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-63500199469840336112012-09-15T14:57:32.182-04:002012-09-15T14:57:32.182-04:00Ah, but did customs (or Jax) mess with his gun? On...Ah, but did customs (or Jax) mess with his gun? One suggestion: reword the first sentence. The "which" is a little ambiguous, and for a moment threw me out of the story.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-39260181338020328312012-09-15T13:58:38.494-04:002012-09-15T13:58:38.494-04:00Thanks, glad you liked!!Thanks, glad you liked!!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-45125352023253873362012-09-15T13:58:10.700-04:002012-09-15T13:58:10.700-04:00T.M., Heidi, Patrick, thanks!!! Yep, Customs...sig...T.M., Heidi, Patrick, thanks!!! Yep, Customs...sigh. Where do I start... :)TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-73160821919147459792012-09-15T13:56:49.668-04:002012-09-15T13:56:49.668-04:00Absolutely!! Glad you enjoyed!!Absolutely!! Glad you enjoyed!!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-23140914131266996682012-09-15T13:56:25.785-04:002012-09-15T13:56:25.785-04:00Good point. Of course (I should probably have ment...Good point. Of course (I should probably have mentioned this) this was the first encounter he had with her invading his space. Plus, Customs made him keep his gun in his luggage... :) Thanks for stopping by!!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-23614215855619260422012-09-15T12:26:00.699-04:002012-09-15T12:26:00.699-04:00Liked the detail about customs... they never seem ...Liked the detail about customs... they never seem to be able to put anything back right!<br /><br />Intriguing snippet. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-36951504600476487672012-09-15T11:31:24.282-04:002012-09-15T11:31:24.282-04:00Great snippet. However, if he feels he's prey,...Great snippet. However, if he feels he's prey, I almost wonder why he doesn't have his gun already holstered.Tyrean Martinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15356604721537744361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-46706545627739296832012-09-15T10:38:23.798-04:002012-09-15T10:38:23.798-04:00I'll chime in with T.M. - nice to see a subtle...I'll chime in with T.M. - nice to see a subtle hint with greater implications - she knows what kind of flowers he likesS.A. Checkhttp://sacheck.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-15429373887850582942012-09-15T09:31:43.198-04:002012-09-15T09:31:43.198-04:00Curse those customs agents always meddling in your...Curse those customs agents always meddling in your stuff!Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-68901118700318175082012-09-15T07:53:22.746-04:002012-09-15T07:53:22.746-04:00Cool snippet, TK!
:) HeidiCool snippet, TK!<br /><br />:) HeidiHeidi Ruby Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02190166838730021237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-756429799959426939.post-19589360525167281372012-09-15T07:20:35.562-04:002012-09-15T07:20:35.562-04:00Always a fun time when the hunter becomes the prey...Always a fun time when the hunter becomes the prey...T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.com