It's been a while since I last posted something - I've been distracted with waiting. But the wait is finally over - my edited version has come to me and I am knee-deep in it.
It's not as bad as I thought it would be. The obvious grammatical errors and sentence structures, those annoying semi-colons and the correct placement of them, and a few parts where I tended to blather on about something that really didn't need much blathering.
Once I have completed the editing process, I promise to elaborate some more...