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The Eternal Knot is the final book in The Lancaster Trilogy, available from Burst Books (Champagne Book Group), or on Amazon.
In this scene, we have another of my favourite characters, Adam, Josie's brother-in-law who just happens to be a prisoner within the Citadel walls, but they like to call it exiled. He's also quite dangerous. Josie likes to visit him since he has a canny way of sorting things out and allowing her to see the bigger picture. Here we have Josie discussing a woman who has returned to the Citadel, who just happens to be an old flame of her husband.
"More
or less," she replied sullenly. "And stupid dinner parties with
stupid dinner guests who irk every last bone in your body."
"Growing
weary of being the President's wife already?" Adam grinned with mischief.
"Who is it this time?"
"Elena
Greco," Josie muttered with distaste.
Shocked, Adam leaned forward with interest. "She's allowed
back in—what is she doing back?"
"Irking every last
bone in my body," Josie glared at him. "Haven't you been
listening?"
Cheers!
Well, jeez, haven't you been listening? :-)
ReplyDeleteHee hee...love the interaction.
Haha! Thanks!!
DeleteGreat back and forth here. The pace and mood are dead on and you set up so much in really only a few lines of dialogue and build a great character in Elena Greco. Entertaining read!!
ReplyDeleteWow, thanks!! And Elena is a very nasty specimen...
DeleteI love the snappy dialogue. Great piece. (psst- I just voted for you *thumbs up*)
ReplyDeleteCheers!! Thank you!!
DeleteLol. Love the last line. Men never listen. Great dialogue-lots of energy.
ReplyDeleteHaha, this is true. They have selective hearing. Thanks!!
DeleteI still voted!
ReplyDeleteHaha!! Thanks Cary!! Appreciated. :D
DeleteWonderful conversation.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteCome on, Adam! Get the cotton out of your ears!
ReplyDeleteI already voted. Was I supposed to vote for yours? :P Seriously, you had my vote when you first tweeted about it. Good luck!
Thanks Patrick!! Muchly appreciated. :D
DeleteI do like their interaction here. Good details support the great dialogue here. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank you!!
DeleteGreat conversation, and nice embedded teaser... what did did this Elana woman do, and why was she allowed back in?
ReplyDeleteOh, she's a wicked sort...you know the kind. ;P Thanks!!
DeleteLovely bit of dialogue! Brings across Josie's feelings beautifully, and gives a mystery to draw the reader in, too - nicely done! (Oh, and I already voted for you last week - good luck!)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Peter!!
DeleteJosie has such a strong voice--I would have recognized her sass even without the introduction.
ReplyDeleteLove her!
:) Heidi
Hahaha!! Thanks Heidi. Yep, she's one of a kind!
DeleteYou could hear the silent 'well d'uh' boys can be so stupid! Loved it, very strong.
ReplyDeleteThanks!! Glad you liked!!
DeleteInterested to know what's behind Adam's shock reaction to the name of the woman. Good luck with the nomination!
ReplyDeleteI find Adam quite interesting! Also, voted. Hope you win!
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