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Ryn is now Ambassador (quite a step down from being Queen, but she wanted it so). While en route to the main planet to oversee an Alliance Treaty, she is intercepted by the relative of an old adversary, who wants her dead. Meanwhile, in this scene, Ryn and her bodyguard, Aiya, are forced to land on a derelict docking platform. Aiya, ever the suspicious Nezu (the name for the feared Nezu Colonists - long story) suspects their shuttle captain of underhanded deeds...
Aiya leaned closer.
“How well do you know of this Captain Garrak?”
Ryn drew her mouth
into a line. “He was approved by Captain Amis. I trust Amis with my life.”
“Anyone’s loyalty can
be bought.” Aiya leaned back and directed her glare into the cockpit.
The shuttle made a sharp jerk, bringing a gasp
from Ryn. She gripped the armrest and gritted her teeth. She hated space
travel.
Cheers!
This reminds me of the old days, getting cabs late at night and my bestie would make a big show of taking the taxi driver's registration number, she used to say if I hadn't called her from my home in fifteen minutes she was calling the police! They must have thought we were nuts! But I can totally get the nerves, nice scenario :)
ReplyDeleteHaha!! Thanks Chantal.
DeleteI've noticed a common trait between Aiya and Josie Bettencourt: they don't like space travel. Good snippet!
ReplyDeleteHee hee. You mean Ryn and Josie. A common trait, it would seem. And, uhhh...Jax would agree with you too. Must be the writer's distaste for air travel...or any sort of travel. ;D
DeleteGreat exchange between these two. Can't wait to see who's right about Cpt. Garrack. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks!! Glad you enjoyed.
DeleteLoyalty is always a tough one--because betrayal often follows. Intriguing, T.K.
ReplyDelete:) Heidi
Thanks Heidi. Yeh, I did plan on the captain to be a goodie...but decided, what the hell, let's stir things up a bit.
DeleteA question of trust - always good for dramatic tension. And the details nicely describe the two somewhat different characters. Good snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Phew...guess i did that right then. :D
DeleteHmm. Just how derelict is that derelict docking platform?
ReplyDeleteFairly beat up, but not so beat up. It's now more of a way station for wayward folks...
DeleteSounds like me and airplanes.
ReplyDeleteKnowing who to trust is always such a hard thing. Can't wait to see if they've been betrayed!
I'm glad I'm not alone. I love to travel, but loath the travelling part.
DeleteThanks!!
Hey... This snippet looks oddly familiar. It's like...I've read this before.
ReplyDeleteHmm...
;)
Does it? ;P Having deja vu moments, are we?
Delete"Anyone's loyalty can be bought" - how very true, sadly.
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