Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday (SFFSat) is a place where a bunch of us post snippets from our written works and also shoot the breeze a little. And before I get ahead of myself, thanks and appreciation as always to those who stop by and leave fantastic comments.
Welcome back to the world of Jax Marlin, sexy vigilante, and Special Inspector Michael Pedroni. PURGED IN FIRE has already been released in an anthology collection, however, I've added a few little tweaks and pulls in this version.
In this scene, we have Pedroni meeting up with a fellow Inspector on a pleasure station where Jax Marlin is supposedly planning her next attack...
“Don’t
be daft, Pedroni. The Marlin is here for Moor. He’s just her type of criminal and when it goes down, he’s mine. This is the Ring…my turf.”
“Go
right ahead, he’s yours.” Pedroni had no desire to claim bragging rights on
Moor; he only wanted Jax. “Just don’t get in my way, Ryder. I’ve had enough of
eager cops getting in the way, just to get to Jax.”
“Oh,” Ryder jerked his head with surprise and a
slow smile spread across his fleshy mouth. “Jax,
is it now?”
Cheers!
I got my copy already and I cannot wait to read it! Lurve Jax and Pedroni.
ReplyDeleteVery sly "Jax, is it now?" I LOVE that!
Hee hee. THANKS JC!! I'm sure you'll LURVE it. :D
DeleteCongratulations. I'll have to check this out. Great snippet
ReplyDeleteThanks!!
DeleteYour cover is killer. Now, I've got one more title to add to my list of to-buy an TBR. This interaction is great. I love the knowing smile at the end and the description of it being "fleshy."
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DeleteThanks, JM. I may have had a...ahem...wee hand in the design. :D
DeleteOoooh those slips of the tongue.... can't fool those Inspectors for a minute. Good luck with your launch!!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lyndie!
DeleteOoh! I read this. ;)
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DeleteNever a good idea when you get to a first name basis with your perp. Congrats on the release! It's a great series.
ReplyDeleteThanks!! Have to admit, the Marlin series is my fave to write.
ReplyDeleteI think he's obsessed with her in more ways than one.
ReplyDeleteA wee bit. :)
DeleteUh, oh! Did our inspector make a slip of the tongue? I smell trouble. Looking forward to reading this one, too!
ReplyDeleteThat he did. Oopsie! Thanks P.
DeleteOops...looks like Pedroni tipped his hand in this one. Can't wait to read this one.
ReplyDeleteHaha! Thanks. I think you may have already seen this one before...in an anthology.
DeleteHaha! Awesome snippet! Looks like someone is getting a little too cloooooose.
ReplyDeleteThank you! A little too close...you think! ;D
DeleteSo they're on a first name basis, huh. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet!
They certainly are.... ;D
DeleteOooo...“Jax, is it now?”--The Romantic in me loves where this is going :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!! Glad I could please!
DeleteAlways dangerous to get emotionally involved in your work - sometimes the emotions can shift and take you into uncharted waters. Does Pedroni realise what he is saying when he comments that he "only wants Jax"? One of those nice phrases that can carry more than one meaning...
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