Today, I'm featuring a snippet from a WIP with the working title of Time Fracture. This is a short story (or not) spawned from an idea my brother had, and where I've embellished into a sort of creepy science fiction borderline paranormal.
The premise is that as we age, we lose time, a phenomena shared by every person. However, in this screwy world, the culprit of this lost time, is Time itself. Our hero must now seek a way to escape its clutches, resetting Time to what it once was.
This scene, continues directly on from where I left off last week (check it out here) where he realizes his watch is part of the cause. Here, our hero, after pinpointing the cause of lost Time, makes other startling discoveries.
I’ll tell you why, because I’ve learned
the truth.
In the days of my youth, our house only
held two Time Markers: an electronic wall clock in the kitchen, and my father’s
wristwatch. Unless Time called you, the need to mark Time’s progress went
unnoticed. You were safe; it hadn’t yet seen you completely.
I look around my house now, an old
post-colonial, semi-brownstone townhouse that has stood for over a hundred
years. It has seen many summers, withstood many bitter winters, rejoiced in the
birth of spring and wept with the falling of autumn’s leaves. It has seen Time
progress into the twenty-first century and has held Time Markers within its
walls—it has held many secrets.
My house is filled with obscenities.
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My house is usually only filled with obscenities when sports are being shown on the TV...or when contestants can't figure out easy answers on Wheel of Fortune. :-)
ReplyDeleteHee hee! That happens when our Xbox is on!
DeleteWow...what a neat concept that clocks are acting as agents of Time and that innocent looking Mickey Mouse wristwatch has a more menacing agenda. I love that they've infiltrated every aspect of our lives and having Time itself as your antagonist. Looking forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteThanks!! Yes, those benign looking wristwatches are dastardly little things! And, oh no! There's clocks or time markers EVERYwhere!
DeleteClocks are agents of Time?! I need to destroy my watch and all of my clocks now!
ReplyDeleteI stopped wearing a watch for a while now. It becomes a habit (and an annoying one) where your eyes cant' seem to stop checking it. True? :) We're MARKED!!
DeleteMy house is full of broken clocks and clocks that don't hold accurate time. And I never wear a watch... am I safe?
ReplyDeleteYou're good for now. And that trip to the mountains did the trick is confusing the Time Markers. They didn't 'see' you. :)
DeleteGreat story idea, very Twilight Zone!
ReplyDeleteOh, cool. Thank you!!!
DeleteThe language of this piece is so wonderful. I truly enjoy this premise and these snippets are fantastic.
ReplyDeleteThank you, JM. I'm so glad you liked it!!
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