Friday 27 July 2012

SFFSat - July 28

Welcome to another SFFSat, where a bunch of us post snippets from our written works and shoot the breeze.  Thanks also to everyone who stops by and leaves awesome comment.  Much appreciated!

Today, I'm featuring a snippet from a WIP with the working title of Time Fracture. This is a short story (or not) spawned from an idea my brother had, and where I've embellished into a sort of creepy science fiction borderline paranormal.

The premise is that as we age, we lose time, a phenomena shared by every person. However, in this screwy world, the culprit of this lost time, is Time itself. Our hero must now seek a way to escape its clutches, resetting Time to what it once was.

This scene, continues directly on from where I left off last week (check it out here) where he realizes his watch is part of the cause. Here, our hero, after pinpointing the cause of lost Time, makes other startling discoveries.

But how could this innocuous device hold such dangerous powers? This marvel of science, of ingenuity, of craftsmanship—what could be so sinister about it?
I’ll tell you why, because I’ve learned the truth.
In the days of my youth, our house only held two Time Markers: an electronic wall clock in the kitchen, and my father’s wristwatch. Unless Time called you, the need to mark Time’s progress went unnoticed. You were safe; it hadn’t yet seen you completely.
I look around my house now, an old post-colonial, semi-brownstone townhouse that has stood for over a hundred years. It has seen many summers, withstood many bitter winters, rejoiced in the birth of spring and wept with the falling of autumn’s leaves. It has seen Time progress into the twenty-first century and has held Time Markers within its walls—it has held many secrets.
My house is filled with obscenities.

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12 comments:

  1. My house is usually only filled with obscenities when sports are being shown on the TV...or when contestants can't figure out easy answers on Wheel of Fortune. :-)

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    1. Hee hee! That happens when our Xbox is on!

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  2. Wow...what a neat concept that clocks are acting as agents of Time and that innocent looking Mickey Mouse wristwatch has a more menacing agenda. I love that they've infiltrated every aspect of our lives and having Time itself as your antagonist. Looking forward to reading more.

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    1. Thanks!! Yes, those benign looking wristwatches are dastardly little things! And, oh no! There's clocks or time markers EVERYwhere!

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  3. Clocks are agents of Time?! I need to destroy my watch and all of my clocks now!

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    1. I stopped wearing a watch for a while now. It becomes a habit (and an annoying one) where your eyes cant' seem to stop checking it. True? :) We're MARKED!!

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  4. My house is full of broken clocks and clocks that don't hold accurate time. And I never wear a watch... am I safe?

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    1. You're good for now. And that trip to the mountains did the trick is confusing the Time Markers. They didn't 'see' you. :)

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  5. Great story idea, very Twilight Zone!

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  6. The language of this piece is so wonderful. I truly enjoy this premise and these snippets are fantastic.

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    1. Thank you, JM. I'm so glad you liked it!!

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